Opening:Sweepers

Wyatt pulled his knife out of the infected's corpse and wiped it on the infected's rag of a shirt. He stood and faced the rest of the exterminators.Louis and Akio were making their rounds, making sure the infected stayed down by giving them the dead check, a silenced round or blade through the neck, which severed the spinal chord from the brain...

New Idea

Hey guys,let me know what you think of this stroryline
David Elwood-13 year old boy.Searching for mssing father with help of his twin Richard.But he is actually mentally deranged.David holds Richard's personality inside of him as well as his own, but David thinks of Richard that he is actuaaly there next to him. This mental state will be subtly hinted at throughout plot but will only be revealed towards end of the book. Is this okay? Leave a comment if you like.

Hello guys

Hey all, I've started this blog to post my writings on the Web. Feel free to give comments(productive ones please!) on my misadventures in writing. I'll be posting an excerpt of a writing I'm currently working on soon...so I hope to hear from all of you!Peace